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kimNanthony
Perfection
Member since 2/07 3109 total posts
Wedding Date:
6/1/2008 3:30 PM
Wed. Location:
Villa Lombardi's
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Re: Proof Readers Needed!
Posted by Kimbalina
Posted by kimNanthony
I have a suggestion that may make it flow better.
What about this:
Because you have shared
In our lives with your
friendship and love,
together with our parents, we
Kimberly XXX
and
Greg XXX
I like the wording! Thank you I have to show it to FH!
Thank you
No problem. FH and I used this wording also. We used:
Together with our families (or parents)
we request the honour of your presence when
Kimberly XXX
and
Anthony XXX
exchange marriage vows.
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Posted 5/12/08 10:20 PM 
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kimNanthony
Perfection
Member since 2/07 3109 total posts
Wedding Date:
6/1/2008 3:30 PM
Wed. Location:
Villa Lombardi's
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Re: Proof Readers Needed!
bump for Kim
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Posted 5/13/08 12:14 PM
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Kimbalina
225 invited 159 YES - 62 NO
Member since 1/07 14746 total posts
Wedding Date:
11/8/2008 6:00 AM
Wed. Location:
The Inn at East Wind
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Re: Proof Readers Needed!
Thanks! I saw this before and notebooked it.
I typed up and printed out the diffrent 'editions' and we are going to have to make up our minds!
Thank you for all your help everyone!
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Posted 5/13/08 12:23 PM
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jeanne08
"I'm Addicted"
Member since 4/07 2658 total posts
Wedding Date:
8/24/2014 1:00 AM
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Message edited 8/29/2008 1:23:16 AM.
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Posted 5/13/08 12:35 PM
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mrspalomino148
Thank heaven for little BOYS!!
Member since 4/07 3644 total posts
Wedding Date:
1/4/2008 5:30 PM
Wed. Location:
Check!!
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Re: Proof Readers Needed!
well i cant proof read, because I'm not really good at it lol... but i really love your invite wording!
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Posted 5/13/08 12:58 PM
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Mrs. V 2008
New user name for the newlywed
Member since 9/06 20322 total posts
Wedding Date:
8/15/2008 4:00 PM
Wed. Location:
Watermill
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Re: Proof Readers Needed!
I agree with the other suggestions! otherwise it sounds great kim
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Posted 5/13/08 1:03 PM
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