what do you think?...

Mr. & Mrs. Bride's Parents
&
Mr. & Mrs. Groom's Parents
Request the honour of your presence
As their children

Emily Jane
&
Alessandro

Join their hands and hearts before God
And exchange matrimonial vows

Friday, the twenty-third of June
Two thousand and six
At six o’clock in the evening

St Brigid’s Church
75 Post Avenue
Westbury, NY

Reception to follow at
The Jericho Terrace


Do you think the "join their hands and hearts" is cheesy? My mom thought "request the honour of your presence at the marriage of the children" was a bit boring. so i spiced it up a bit. opinions please. i need to order them asap. TIA!!!