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J&S
"I'm Addicted"
Member since 11/03 1203 total posts
Wedding Date:
8/19/2005 12:00 AM
Wed. Location:
Smithtown Landing CC
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Please proof invite
They gave us a faxed copy of the invite but I don't want to post bc it looks horrible (bad fax machine). Could you please proof read-the wording (minus the names) and captials are exactly how it is on the invite. TIA!!!
Jane Ann Doe
Daughter of
John and Mary Doe
and
Joe Bob Smith
Son of
Ann Smith and the late Thomas Smith
invite you to share in the joy
of the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
Friday, the nineteenth of August
Two thousand and five
at half past three o’clock
Name of Church
Address
Smithtown, New York
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Posted 4/7/05 10:42 PM 
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troutster
1 yr and loving it!
Member since 7/04 1128 total posts
Wedding Date:
8/19/2005 5:00 PM
Wed. Location:
Westbury Manor
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Re: Please proof invite
Hey Date twin!
I think it looks great. I just ordered my invites (Tuesday). I wouldn't change anything.
It is so exciting isn't! :)
When are you mailing yours out?
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Posted 4/7/05 10:55 PM
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J&S
"I'm Addicted"
Member since 11/03 1203 total posts
Wedding Date:
8/19/2005 12:00 AM
Wed. Location:
Smithtown Landing CC
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Re: Please proof invite
Posted by troutster
Hey Date twin!
I think it looks great. I just ordered my invites (Tuesday). I wouldn't change anything.
It is so exciting isn't! :)
When are you mailing yours out?
Hey another twin!! I want to mail it out the first week of June bc I didn't do STDs and want to give people plenty of time bc of vacations.
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Posted 4/7/05 10:56 PM
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SomethingBlu
Enjoying the journey...
Member since 10/04 10523 total posts
Wedding Date:
5/27/2005 3:00 PM
Wed. Location:
Jericho Terrace - A+
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Re: Please proof invite
It looks great, I would do two thousand and five in all lower caps though and "o'clock" is used to specify the hour on the hour...so twelve o'clock, one o'clock, two o'clock, etc...half past three would be "half past three in the afternoon".
Message edited 4/7/2005 11:06:20 PM.
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Posted 4/7/05 11:05 PM
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aidamarie
Board Fanatic
Member since 1/05 676 total posts
Wedding Date:
7/8/2005 6:30 PM
Wed. Location:
Antuns
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Re: Please proof invite
Posted by J&S
They gave us a faxed copy of the invite but I don't want to post bc it looks horrible (bad fax machine). Could you please proof read-the wording (minus the names) and captials are exactly how it is on the invite. TIA!!!
Jane Ann Doe
Daughter of
John and Mary Doe
and
Joe Bob Smith
Son of
Ann Smith and the late Thomas Smith
invite you to share in the joy
of the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
Friday, the nineteenth of August
Two thousand and five
at half past three o’clock
Name of Church
Address
Smithtown, New York
It sounds nice except dont get upset, but... the way the invite is written, the words "OUR" and "WE" dont fit in IMO.
I think its supposed to read
of the beginning of "THEIR" new life together
when "THEY" exchange marriage vows Friday, the nineteenth of August. Sorry dont be mad. Just that the invite is written as a third party and Our and We do not sound right.
Message edited 4/8/2005 12:58:48 AM.
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Posted 4/8/05 12:53 AM
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J&S
"I'm Addicted"
Member since 11/03 1203 total posts
Wedding Date:
8/19/2005 12:00 AM
Wed. Location:
Smithtown Landing CC
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Re: Please proof invite
It sounds nice except dont get upset, but... the way the invite is written, the words "OUR" and "WE" dont fit in IMO.
I think its supposed to read
of the beginning of "THEIR" new life together
when "THEY" exchange marriage vows Friday, the nineteenth of August. Sorry dont be mad. Just that the invite is written as a third party and Our and We do not sound right.
No this is helpful keep them coming. I'm going to keep it at half past three o'clock bc I looked this up and it is grammatically correct.
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Posted 4/8/05 8:25 AM
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SomethingBlu
Enjoying the journey...
Member since 10/04 10523 total posts
Wedding Date:
5/27/2005 3:00 PM
Wed. Location:
Jericho Terrace - A+
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Re: Please proof invite
Posted by J&S
No this is helpful keep them coming. I'm going to keep it at half past three o'clock bc I looked this up and it is grammatically correct.
Sweetie, it is not...there are many sites that have this info, this is just one I found on a quick search...o'clock stands for "on the hour"...not any variation of it.
Telling time
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Posted 4/8/05 9:52 AM
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J&S
"I'm Addicted"
Member since 11/03 1203 total posts
Wedding Date:
8/19/2005 12:00 AM
Wed. Location:
Smithtown Landing CC
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Re: Please proof invite
To put special emphasis or exactness on the time, use the number, as in 4 o'clock. To be a bit more formal about things, though, write out the number, as in four o'clock. If you need to include hours and minutes with o'clock, write it as half past four o'clock or half after four o'clock (but not four-thirty o'clock).
This is what I found plus this is how my brother did it for his wedding and I know my SIL would have made sure bc she is very into details.
Message edited 4/8/2005 10:05:54 AM.
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Posted 4/8/05 10:02 AM
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eroxgirl
Mr. & Mrs. Eroxs
Member since 11/02 6601 total posts
Wedding Date:
6/19/2004 12:00 PM
Wed. Location:
Westbury Manor
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Re: Please proof invite
Posted by J&S
Jane Ann Doe
Daughter of
John and Mary Doe
and
Joe Bob Smith
Son of
Ann Smith and the late Thomas Smith
invite you to share in the joy
of the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
Friday, the nineteenth of August
Two thousand and five
at half past three o’clock
Name of Church
Address
Smithtown, New York
I like it, except the the line that says "of the beginning of our new life together" reads a little funny to me... I think "as we begin our new life together" might sound better IMO.
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Posted 4/8/05 10:17 AM
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bethsiar
http://bethandevan.shutterfly.
Member since 7/02 3068 total posts
Wedding Date:
5/30/2004 5:00 AM
Wed. Location:
Oheka Castle
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Re: Please proof invite
Posted by eroxgirl
Posted by J&S
Jane Ann Doe
Daughter of
John and Mary Doe
and
Joe Bob Smith
Son of
Ann Smith and the late Thomas Smith
invite you to share in the joy
of the beginning of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
Friday, the nineteenth of August
Two thousand and five
at half past three o’clock
Name of Church
Address
Smithtown, New York
I like it, except the the line that says "of the beginning of our new life together" reads a little funny to me... I think "as we begin our new life together" might sound better IMO.
I agree that was the first thing to stand out to me, of the beginning of, just doesn't read smoothly.
I assume you like the invitation being in the first person which of course makes it more complicated (vs. the third person i.e. invite you to their wedding etc)
We invite you to be with us
as we begin our new life together
on Sunday, the sixth of June
nineteen hundred and ninety-nine
at one o'clock in the afternoon
here is an example from this website which has a ton of invite wording ideas:
http://www.invitationsetc.com/w_01.htm
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Posted 4/8/05 10:31 AM
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bethsiar
http://bethandevan.shutterfly.
Member since 7/02 3068 total posts
Wedding Date:
5/30/2004 5:00 AM
Wed. Location:
Oheka Castle
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Re: Please proof invite
I just saw something else, they should have writtenON before Friday:
invite you to share in the joy
as we being our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
On Friday, the nineteenth of August
Two thousand and five
at half past three o’clock
Name of Church
Address
Smithtown, New York
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Posted 4/8/05 10:45 AM
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bethsiar
http://bethandevan.shutterfly.
Member since 7/02 3068 total posts
Wedding Date:
5/30/2004 5:00 AM
Wed. Location:
Oheka Castle
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Re: Please proof invite
PPS ur going to hate me lol
I would put Son of Ann and the late Thomas Smith instead of Ann Smith and the late Thomas Smith b/c people might think that either they were divorced when he died or that she got remarried and kept her name- unless that is the case.
I double checked this and it is how they do it in the obits (depressing as that is)
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Posted 4/8/05 11:12 AM
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